Ответ (EN)
исправим ошибки в тексте.
- I won't definitely go → I definitely won't go
- Mum is made me → Mum made me
- I'll see the doctor this afternoon. He will tell me to stay in the bed → I'll see the doctor this afternoon. He will tell me to stay in bed
- I'll expect Miss Jones will give back our homework in class tomorrow → I'll expect Miss Jones will give back our homework in class tomorrow
- May you collect mine for me, please! → Could you collect mine for me, please!
- I definitely will be at home this evening and I'll probable be in bed → I definitely will be at home this evening and I'll probably be in bed
- so I'll phoning you then → so I'll phone you then
При проверке текста обращай внимание на порядок слов, предлоги и правильность использования времен.
Редфлаг: Если сомневаешься в порядке слов, попробуй перефразировать предложение на русском, чтобы понять логику.