Find mistakes. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Nancy who writes: I know you had your birthday yesterday. Where and how did you celebrate it this year? What presents did you get and which of them did you like most? How do you plan to share photos from the party, if at all? Oh, by the way, my elder sister has moved to New York ... Write a letter to Nancy. In your letter: answer her questions Write 100-140 words. Remember the rules of letter writing.

Ответ (RU)

• «I know you had your birthday yesterday.» – Фраза некорректна, поскольку «yesterday» (вчера) относится к прошедшему времени, а «had» (иметь) в настоящем. Правильно: «I know you celebrated your birthday yesterday.» (Я знаю, что ты отмечал свой день рождения вчера.)
• «my elder sister has moved to New York» – предложение не завершено точкой.
• Сокращение в тексте: «Of cause» – ошибка, правильный вариант «Of course».
• Предложение «I am going to upload few on my web page vk today.» – ошибка, правильный вариант «I am going to upload a few photos to my web page on VK today.».
• Предложение «Where did she stay there? Do you miss her?» – не совсем корректно. Лучше написать: «Where does she live? Do you miss her?»